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個性を殺さず、たとえきらびやかなキャリアやアカデミック・バックグラウンドが無くとも、 幅広い視点からビジネススクールへの効果的なアピールの仕方について、エッセイ・カウンセリング及び インタビュー・トレーニングにおいて指導してくれました。エド先生が「I like this essay.」と言えば、 まずインタビューに呼ばれないことはないと思う。彼のAnalyticalな頭脳はそれほど信頼の置けるものである。 エド先生のエッセイ・カウンセリングは決して代筆はしてくれないスタイルであるため楽はできないが、 エド先生がくれるコメントはいつも非常に示唆に富んでいて、自分のエッセイがどんどん深まっていくのが実感できる。 また、インタビューにおける受け答えの組み立て方に対するアドバイスはプレゼンテーション自体にそもそも馴染みの少ない 我々日本人にとっては圧巻であった。(エド先生曰く、欧米人とて誰もが効果的なプレゼンテーション能力を有しているわけではない とのこと。)
男性、社費、証券会社勤務、UC Berkeley 2008


Edのカウンセリングなくして合格はなかったと思っているし、実際結果が証明していると思う。 Emailの迅速なレスは非常に助かった。また速いだけでなく、決して手を抜かず、時には厳しすぎると思われるコメントは、 よりレベルの高いESSAYを追求しなくては厳しい受験戦争を勝ち抜けない状況下に必要なことだと思う。 ただ厳しいだけでなく、自分はまだできると勇気付けてくれる優しさも持ち合わせているので、 結果Qualityの高いESSAYが仕上がった。
男性、社費、広告代理店勤務、Wharton 2007


-Quality of the comments: the comments for the essays were always very superb. Ed-sensei always gave great advices to make my essays more logical, powerful, and convincing.
-Priority to the students’ original idea: Ed-sensei always prioritized to make the student’s original idea more powerful, which is very different from other counseling schools. That is what I really liked about Edogijuku.
-Speed: The speed of response was very quick, even at the peak timing. This was REALLY helpful.
そして何よりも、エド先生ご自身の人柄が素晴らしいです!時には鋭いコメントを下さり、時には不安な受験生の私を励ましてくださいました。 私のように自分のエッセイには自分のアイデアを100%反映させたいと強く思っていた人間が、 全幅の信頼をおいて最後までエド先生についていこうと思えたのも、エド先生自身の、 受験生のその個性をそのまま最大限に伸ばそうとされる温かい人柄によるところが非常に大きいです。 どのようにしたら「強いApplicantになれるか」を念頭におきながら最後まで絶対に諦めないでほしいと思います。 そして、自分の気持ちを正直にエッセイで表現していただきたいと思います。それをサポートしてくださるのがエド先生であり、 私はエド先生と作り上げたエッセイが最終的な合格の決め手になったと確信しています。
女性、私費、化粧品会社勤務、LBS 2008


I don’t know much about the other essay counselors, but it is no doubt that working with Ed is the best shortcut to reach your success. To me, he was not only an excellent counselor who effectively pulled out my ideas, but also like a reliable brother. He does not give me an exact answer, instead gives me a clue to generate my own words. It was not an easy road, but I learned the importance of “thinking deeper by myself” throughout his counseling, and this process will be my lifetime asset. I spent hard times caused by the unsuccessful GMAT, but with his continuous support and encouragement, I could keep my motivation. Email to Ed or join his party at first, and get his motto. Then, you will find your right way for the future.。
男性、社費、通信会社勤務、Emory 2008


どんなに急な時でも、誠心誠意対応してもらいとても満足しています。 いつも本当に信頼できる人に助けられているような感じでした。
男性 30代前半 メーカー MIT/MOT


ここの教え方は本当に効果的でした。エッセイの添削だけでなく、より効果的なエッセイを書く為の多くの有意義な コメントをもらえました。特に私のエッセイの為に、個性を出す部分そして強調する部分がどこかを教えてもらう事により、 読みやすく、より印象に残るエッセイが書けたと思います。 そして個々の学校にマッチするようなキーワードも教えてもらいました。
男性 20代後半 商社 SLOAN MBA


コーネルはリーダーに一貫性を求めると教えてもらい、面接の際に非常に役に立ちました。 本当に個々のビジネス・スクールの個性に関して精通していて、 「何故この学校が良いのか」を明確に教えてもらいました。
男性 30代前半 コミュニケーションズ CORNELL JOHNSON MBA


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Your style is very effective. Your response time is very short. It is effective especially for the applicants who have little time and want to work on essays at night. I was able to do brain storming through exchanging e-mail with you frequently. You understand business and especially my company, so it was very easy to make you understand what I want to write. Your push strategy for Michigan especially helped me.
男性 30代前半 金融 コミュニケーションズ Michigan MBA

Face to face meetings were efficient because I could explain my idea with no time loss. The most helpful part was deep and thoughtful brainstorming. On-line/email counseling also helped me work efficiently day and night, mainly midnight.
男性 30代前半 商社 Duke, Fuqua School of Business

I really, really appreciate your service, which was very efficient and your advice truly saved time. Your lessons were also timely and suitable for me. I started my application very late, and it was hard for me to finish my applications through face-to-face lessons only.
男性 20代後半 官僚 University of Washington MBA

Ed sensei understood the culture and Japanese corporations and the typical nature of their employees. Such understanding helps him advise how to differentiate yourself from other Japanese students. Ed sensei also gives live and updated (both official and unofficial) information of various schools, for example, how an admission of a certain school value “leadership” and “teamwork” skills. Ed sensei never wrote essays, but led me to write convincing essays by always asking “why” and “how”.
男性 30代前半 商社 LBS MBA

He understands Japanese language and culture, as well as Western culture. That helped me to express my ideas to Westerners. He eagerly listened to my ideas and tried to "analyze" me. As a result, he found my uniqueness - things that I never realized. His assistance was very helpful in organizing my whole ideas, especially for the interview, which was the hardest for me because it required me to express well-organized, understandable (for Westerners) ideas with my conversational skills.
男性 30代前半 メーカー University of Minnesota MBA

You offer the most efficient approach for those who have not had much experience writing in English like me. I learned how to make the essays powerful. Your comments were so concise and concrete that I easily found the best way. You demonstrated how to connect the paragraphs and lots of expressions to avoid complicated sentences. Your advice inspired me to find personal ideas.
男性 20代後半 官僚 University of Washington MBA

Your strength is Brainstorming and Idea finding. Your style is excellent, I could discover myself.
男性 20代後半 コンサルティング Wharton MBA

You helped me to make my essays vivid. Only correcting grammar and structure is not enough.
男性 20代後半 金融 Tuck MBA

I found solutions for writing essays from your perspective and different point of view.
男性 30代前半 メーカー Rotterdam MBA

I learned how to express my personal experiences in my essay.
女性 30代前半 リサーチ Yale, School of Forestry and Environmental Studies

私の人生をいっしょに振り返っていただくことで、自分の留学目的、および キャリアゴールを、より明確にすることができました。自己の「チャレンジ」の姿勢に気づかされました。発見でした。自己の特徴を、リアルな感性あふれる表現で生き生きと描けました。 いいエッセイになったと思います。
男性 20代後半 IT Cornell MS


The individual attention was instrumental for "finding myself". Ed always tried to improve his class reflecting my comments and unique requests and fully customized his lesson for me. エドさんは、常に私の要求に応えようと努力してくれるので、この点に関しては非常に満足しています。エッセイにしろ、インタビューにしろ、生徒一人一人のバックグラウンドや弱点が違うわけですから、レッスンが如何に「カスタマイズ」されているか、という点は、講師選択の重要なポイントになります。エドさんのフレキシブルな対応は、非常に大きなアドバンテージです。
男性 30代前半 メーカー University of Minnesota MBA

You had a more personal relationship than other counseling. Believing each other is very important to provide excellent counseling service. If I had not believed you, I would not have told my personal stories to you. Thus my essays would not be vivid.
男性 20代後半 金融 Tuck MBA


I've never heard of such a trainer in the industry.
男性 30代前半 メーカー University of Minnesota MBA

You were always there when I needed your help. Flexibility & Professionalism those are the two words I would answer to describe Edo-gijyuku. In terms of providing ideas, your imagination, the quality & quantity of the words & phrases you have in your dictionary draw, I will say from the bottom of my heart, FIRST CLASS!
男性 20代後半 金融 University of Virginia, Darden MBA


Counseling helps to make my essay more creative and attractive by including stories related to Japanese culture. I could come up with many ideas though I couldn’t find them myself. The “Why this school” part is most difficult to write when I tried to differentiate my essay from others. But with your help and idea, I could improve my essay with deep understanding of schools beyond Web and Brochure information, especially for Claremont, CMU and Simon. Your information from alumni and friends was very helpful to decide my career goal in line with reality.
女性 20代後半 外資系金融 Drucker School of Management MBA

My thinking style improved more than my writing. I use the skills I learned at work because to write good essays means basically using the same skills needed to write good academic and professional reports.
男性 20代後半 金融 Tuck MBA

Thanks for excellent lessons. My success was due to your help.
男性 20代後半 官僚 Chicago GSB

The counseling was so good and so was the convenience of sending and receiving advice on the net. You always asked me, "Why?" and "How?" in different ways. If I got stuck with ideas, you gave me really good suggestions, which helped me keep on thinking in different ways and did not let me stop there. You were really good at reminding me of my real intentions. Your deep insight into clients' needs and potentials and your beautiful suggestions on writing skills and essay composition make you REALLY professional. You could understand my personality and passion in a way that cannot be explained on paper I cannot come up with any way to improve your lessons. I am very satisfied. Find an excellent counselor like Ed-san! He is the best!!
男性 20代後半 建設 Yale School of Management


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